Look at the picture, and write a paragraph. (Hint: Use AF6, AF1)
Helpful words: Misty, bitter, crooked, strange, ice, towering, faint
My example:
The old castle stood towering over the land. Its creul, pointy towers high among the clouds engulfed in the morning mist. The fresh, cold snow of winter lay silently on the roads as a bitter breeze crept among the crooked branches of the naked trees. A stange feeling cloaked the land...
Miss duffield i have had a go at the challenge i will bring it in tommorow.
ReplyDeleteIf you have time, you can type it up here :) ..but I will be pleased to see it anyway...
DeleteThe old castle stood still as a statue towering higher and higher over the land. It's cruel,knife shaped towers high among the clouds engulfed in the misty morning. The fresh,freezing snow of winter lay silently as a sharp breeze sneaked among impenatrable of naked trees. A weird feeling cloaked the land as the trees grew and branches looked like fingers cloaking the misty island.
ReplyDeleteThis is really great Rashema! I love the use of "fresh,freezing snow..."
DeleteGreat attempt at impenatrable.. almost correct! Excellent :)
the misty, old castle stood silently watching every move
ReplyDeleteGood start... would love to see a complete paragraph...
DeleteThe plan,white mist covered the the hopeless,depresing mountains.The bleak,old castle stood as statue.The impenatrable,twisted twiges covering the freedom.
ReplyDeleteHow about... The impenatrable, twisted trees blocked the road to the open road, to the only path which led to freedom.
ReplyDelete-Super start, 5HP! Think I will add you alongside Ibrahim to gold cup writing.. :) Well Done!
The tall,pointy castle was standing proud in the distance. The trees were shrouded with snow, and the trunks of the trees were pale. The mist swirled around in the air like it was searching for it's lost love. All the leaves had turned dark and had all fell of the tall,dense trees.Ken walked along the bent path wondering what he will find...
ReplyDeleteFew little tweeks needed... despite this, a very very creative piece of writing Caitlin! Always a pleasure to read :)
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